For one its not a collarb its a collab, lol, title should read "Sinful Obsession (Collab)", over all this is a good poem, both of you did great, make sure to leave a link to her profile below the poem so other people can go checks hers out too, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Hey,
nice poem, I think that many can relate to it =) good flow and rhyming, i enjoy reading your work!
thank you for your nice comment, and no it isn't something I went through(I have a very nice boyfriend) I just like writing fiction,
kisses stephanie

Hey, Well done on this poem to both of use it was nicely written and a good effort by you both. I enjoyed reading this and it flowed nicely. Good effort ~mel

Great poem wonderful job i think i like theese kinds of poems lol good job and thanks for the ocmment

keenan

It's a rather interesting collab which shows a promising potential to be augmented. On the whole, it's a fine work, nonetheless. Nice shot, both of you!

Debbie