Creative..
I loved it..
Well Done,
Elainex

Great poem. 5/5. Good imagination.

Ray

I love it!
I tried to sing it and it went...pretty well, I don't really have a singingvoice...
Anyway, love it!
5/5

I love this...original and unqiue in concept and very creative.
The repetition works well, and the imagery creates vivid pictures.
Flow is beautiful throughout.

Again diffrent is good, I liked this.The word chice was amazing and the flow was perfect. The emtion was clear and strong. I think you did an excellnt job on this one. 5/5

Awww!!.very sweet....creative!.perfectly flowed through out n the word choice was also superb!
Kp writing!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx