Outside

by Shelly   May 17, 2007


I sit down on the rock
Watching the twirling wind
laughing as the leaves dance
upon the grasses skin

The trees away with the music
and it's branches swing around
and even the the little mushrooms
laugh without a sound

The wind pushes me up
wanting me to play too
I laugh and join the fun
why don't you join too?

Feel the amazing wind
the soft grass on your feet
and once you started to play with me
I'm sure you'll feel complete!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jess

    Just reading this poem made me smile, I love the imagery.
    Brilliant words and a great flow, a very fun read! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by KAP DAR

    Very playful light and fun! i enjoyed (: 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Fsams

    Its a nice piece. Nature lovers has such beautiful thoughts n u r one of them. from my side its 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Well Done.
    The flow was perfect, the wording great. I loved the imagery you used. It was just overall a wonderful read.
    I absolutley loved your piece.
    Well penned,
    Elainex

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