"this orb it pulls the tides
in the sea in me" I like the story
this draws readers attention. Thanks for commenting. I'll pay you the same courtesy.

I love how the first stanza took me
like right on the beach at sunset.
Building me up emotionally and
visually to the fourth stanza and
I must say it blew me away with
that last line, but still burning bright.
An excellent read indeed thank
you for sharing and write on,
Bogie

This is beautiful to the point of haunting. I love the imagery and every stanza is flawless. I absolutely love the ending. One of the best poems I've read in awhile!

Take care,

GaryJ