Hi Tia,

nice poem, i like it but just some problem with interface MS word perhaps. You can edit
this ones. 4/7.

Iâ??ll get even with you
With all thatâ??s left in me
Thatâ??s all that you will know

nice introduction too.

Ray

The first poem not written in slang and it was pretty good lol. I liked it. 5/5
-vino