I love your poem I feel you've wrote this from the bottom of your heart Steve 5/5

Not too bad, some changes could be made, I'll tell you them on pm.

Aww its so sweet i liked it Brianna great job!
=)

Awww Brianna
this is so cute!!
I loved it!!
you did a fantastic job!!
The imagery was wonderful
very great love poem I must say

Awww Brianna
I really like this poem
you did an excellent job
flow was good
same with the rhyming
nice work
5/5
love always
kaila

AWW iTSz REALLY A NiCE P0EM. KEEP UP THE GREAT W0RK !!

5/5.

FEEL FREE T0 CUM & CHECK 0UT MY P0EMS. :)

Whether its theme is hackneyed or not, this certainly was a gorgeous love poem. How you've written this in such an expressive manner emanated your emotions within. It's so sweet! Nicely done. ~Marian

Well order in its meter and movement. quite good.