This was amazing i loved the emotion portrayed in it i found it to be deep and powerful. A great poem with a great meaning ~mel

Omg thats soooo good if only people did understand u wright good poems! and if ur really a guy that things chicks should be treated like queens then ur girl must be lucky she jsut dont see......damn wish i had a guy who was actually true weather they were controling or not long as they were true id be lucky with that!

Does she get beat?
good poem

I love this poem great work.. i wish every guy that hit a girl would just die! thats not rite! so i agree with you they aint men they are just little boys