"She hopes that it won't end
this feelings he makes her feel.
The way he is always there for her
and the way he holds so close."
Beautiful lines....sweet poem with a flavour of fear of lose,...u've put in deep emotion n thoughts into this wrk!..kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

This poem was truly perfect! I enjoyed reading every minute of it. I don't think I would change anything. Great work!

Alesia

It's a good feeling when all you can do is think of this one person who makes you happy, while knowing at that moment there doing the same thing. Excellent job 5/5

Now that w2as perfectly wriiten, I loved this poem Excellent word choice, deep emtion, and flowed wonderfully. Exceelent job 5/5

Good poem! great! keep up the good work
ps please comment mine if you have time <smile>
~hazel~

I'm sorry.
I'm going to sound like an old woman but.
I dont' have my glasses so my spelling might not be correct
And I might be reading things incorrectly.

and the fell of his hands.
That didn't make sense.
Do you mean the smell?
I mean, fell is a verb.
I think you're looking for an adjective.

I noticed that you didn't use some of your punctutation correctly.
You needed more of them, hun.

All in all, it was okay.
I'm not a lover so...
I can't really grade that well.
But I do know a lot about grammar,