Your poems is really very nice.

DAT WUZ A NICE POEM N I KNO WAT DAT FEELZ LIKE SO I KAN RELATE 2 IT. KEEP IT UP U DOIN A GUD JOB

Buetiful poem and good rhyming schem for the poem 5/5

I love your poem, keep writing

The ending was good 5/5

Oh so gloomy

no hope

it's the worst thing in life, losing hope

nice one

Love it :) you are an excellent writer. 5/5