Happy birthday

by Fsams   May 19, 2007


Roses and blossoms bloomed today
Spreading the fragrance all the way
The bees and moths sing today
For it's the special 2nd May

Colours of the rainbow shine so bright
Up in the blue sky twinkle light
Removing the borders and taking my wishes
With all my love and humble kisses

Angels from heaven are here
To wish you the wishes of today
I wish if I were there
To wish you a happy b'day

Written by Fsams
19/05/2007
15:30

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    Wow what a nice poem to wish happy birthday! Loved the word choice and the flow was perfect!

    Tc

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a really nice poem for a birthday poem. I liked the whole thing in fact I gave you a 5 great job Plot121

  • 18 years ago

    by Nix

    It is very interesting. It is good but it could be even more better. I don't prefer love poetry. Second stanza is the greatest. I like imagery of this piece.

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i loved this, it was very deep, and it had so much emotions. it was beautifully written. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    Very well written. The poem was catchy, with an excellent flow and wording, as always. I could tell you cared deeply about the subject and were writting from the heart =) Great job, once again!

    5/5

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