Comments : I Will Always Be There ( Kyrielle)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    I need you to know
    Kindness you bestowed
    Feelings we have shared
    I will always be there.

    It's a wonderful Saturday to read your poems.
    Great poem, it's good with coffee especially...thank you Cindy,5/5.

    Ray

  • 16 years ago

    by N.Lee

    YOUR EMOTIONS SEEM TO POUR OUT INTO EACH DETAILED LINE.... I CAN REALATE TO THIS POEM... IT'S A FEELING OF THINKING NO ONE ELSE UNDERSTANDS YOU, BUT THAT ONE PERSON... YOUR BEST FREIND!
    ~*GOOD WORK~*
    PLEASE COMMENT SOME OF MY POEMS
    ~HAZEL~

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Cindy,

    You never cease to amaze me. Your work is always written beautifully & you're a superb writer.

    "You can cry on me
    Your pain I often see
    For forever I'll care
    I will always be there"

    ^ My favorite stanza. 5.5 Fantasic poem, keep writing! =]

    `Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 16 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Cindy,

    Great work and very nice done, the choice of words is good.

    Regards,

    Steve

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    How adorable! This Kyrielle of yours is so endearing to me. It reminds me of the girl whom I'm always fond of--my best friend. Hehe. ^_^ 'Twas perfectly touching that I couldn't help but sense a tear making its way up to the brims of my eyes... Thank you for sharing! Love, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nicely done kyrielle...glad to see you trying new forms...and mastering them completely! Beautiful friendship dedication! Love, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 16 years ago

    by Hayley Beab

    I love your poem.It wasawesomely penned. I have no paticular stanza favorite, for they were all good to me.

    *~~Halle~~*

  • 16 years ago

    by Jesse

    Very good

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Cindy this is probably the best kyrielle ive ever read,
    ive noticed the poetry styles youve been using, and your excellent at them
    i give this one a 5/5!!! keep them up!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey There!! This is an outsnading piece of art here, your poems always touch my heart and they always make me feel as how beautiful life is and then your sad poems make me feel the other way around....you just make me relate to every single word you write and even in between.

    beautiful write

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    A beautiful write ,I loved reading it.Your poems are always so beautifully done and never fail to touch my heart.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Nice poem with beautiful reasons for you to be there for your best friend. I loved this piece :D 5/5 ofcox

    Tc
    Your friend
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicia M

    Nice poem

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Very beautiful poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverMine90

    Awww this poem makes me want to cry...

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a sweet sentiment for your best friend. I bet it means a lot!