Votes and comments welcomed.

Every color, every race
Every soul that was misplaced
Will all be seen?
At Heaven's Gates

5/5. nicely penned. Meaningful.

"Every color, every race
Every soul that was misplaced
Will all be seen?
At Heaven's Gates"

Have you ever wondered whether God will forgive us for the terrible things we have done to eachother. If so, see you there one day :)

Great poem.

What a beautiful poem of faith. Excellent message.

The angles will sing
And worship the king
At Heaven's Gates
We'll see everything

Excellent job!
Loved these lines.
Take Care Cindy

What a beautiful poem ,great job ,keep it up.

...Day of Judgment?

This was rather delightful to read. I'm always pleased to find some individuals like you writing a very heartwarming piece. Thank you for sharing as well as for the comment. Love, Debbie (^_^)

I love this poem!! it was beautifully written and im putting it on my favs list!!

~shattered
Dreams~

It is interesting. I don't understand one thing. Is this some metaphor or you think literally because I don't love to read about religion in the poems. Repetition of the line-At Heaven's Gates- wasn't effective too much.