Good one!!!
5/5

God bless u

Very nice job on this poem. Your love shines.

I miss you girl miss the way
we walk Miss the way we talk
miss the way you smile

Loved this stanza.
Take Care Cindy

One can feel the love and loss deeply in this. I like the repetition of 'miss'-it ties everything together very well.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

GaryJ

I agree with whats already been said. Your love is shining through the words
And the you can feel the pain of missing someone
5/5
*Gem*

Another nicely written poem. I did enjoy reading this bittersweet piece.

Take care now.

-Marian (^^,)

5/5

I really liked this...the sadness behind the words is very deep, and it is easy for the reader to sense your regret.
beautiful imagery and word choice, and perfect flow throughout.

In this poem, i love the way that you use repetition. It really strengthens the whole idea of loss within a person. It prmotes a kind of sad appea but cute because love so pure is hard to come across in a modern society.

Nice piece of work hun

xxx alex xxx

WonderfuL! excellenT! mE luV diS writinG. keeP uP yR gooDS worK..

goD blesS yoU....

>>>>>luzaN

I hope the girl forgave the writer of this poem.. I know the feeling when everything you see around reminds you about this love you had.. Everything..the places you use to be, the things you used tot do..

I guess I have very wild imagination 'cause I can even "see" (imagine) how we looked like there sitting in the cafe and looking each other in eyes..