Very good and kinda creepy at the same time. Something you actually see? Very well written :) I love it

Well written but a bit unclear.

Now that wasn't bad, a little creepy in thought but I can see that the trumoil that may be running through your mind. Just know once you get through the teen years your thoughts will become more clearer. May your heart be filled with peace and joy each and everyday young lady.

sadaddy

That is great. It is sort of dark, but it is sad too. It was wonderful. Good work 5/5

Its so sad