Comments : Death Like Moment

  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Nice poem.

    Crystal ice drip from her eyes
    skin pale,soft, worn out creates her youthful face
    decision her mind shouts yet her hands shake, reaching for the phone
    daisies simple,elegant, known cradle her tears falling heavy and bright.

    It's perfectly written.Emotions are shown.
    5/5.

    plz check out my poems too if u have time.
    All the best,

    Ray