Beautiful poem
had real emotion
sort of sad in a way
loved it!
5/5

Interesting. I got lost at some parts of the piece. Had trouble finding meaning. I started thinking is something hidden? Really made me analyze it. Keep writting... I enjoy poems such as this.

This poem was well written
great poem

Should be 4-line parts and it all kinda mushes together and there's a few grammar mistakes plus i hardly understand what it means, but its poetry and thats the way of things

Good job bro