This is such a good poem, i am gonna have my friend Ashley read this cuz she can really relate right now, i really do like this poem a lot because i know a lot of people who have burdens and weights on their shoulders that they just dont know are there...5/5!

This is really deep.. and of course you already kno this is a really good poem so deep and yet so powerful .. you're gonna be an amazing writer when you grow up.. i just know it because of your vocabulary and your of espressing your feelings.. .then again good job and keep up the work 5/5

I can relate to this. Maybe for this reason i was even more intrested in reading it. The title makes the reader ask loads of questions. What could you mean by tbis weight? Is it weight literally. Or is a weight of trouble s/he carries? It makes the reader want to know what the poems about and so they read on. You again extend this feeling of kinda confusedness in the first two lines. The firsat line we feel as thought its a weight as in a burden. Yet the secound line makes us think.. is the poem about eating disorders or soemthing ismilar? Then you go on to say things like "perfection" and stuff like that. This make me relate it back to anorexia. So this poem, well i can take numerous meaningd from it. And i really enjoyed this about it. the fact that you can take numerous meanings form it. Enjoyable read. Keep it up! xx

Hmmm... i like this poem but thats probaly cause i got freinds like that but hey its still a 5/5 for me

Well done, a good poem, a few mistakes but you know that. keep it up
xxxx

Very beautifully written piece with an awsome flow, brimmed with meanings. Ur wordings r gr8. great means great 5/5 :D
plx do read my 'Thank you'

With love
Fsams