Comments : For You, Blue

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbie
    This is beautiful. Love the imagery in this piece. The first is sad but love the hope and love in the last two stanzas. Excellent write. You never disapoint :)
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Wow!!! What a beautiful poem. I liked everything of it and the title. I added it to my favorites. Like the words--

    For you, blue
    Destiny's design
    Brilliant sky
    Prayer's reply
    Azure dreams align

    Superb!!! 5/5!!!

    Ray Blue

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    The imagery is incredible, you had an excellent choice of words, very well written and very deep..amazing work

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Great poem! Liked that style.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was lovely, really good imagery, a little sad but there was love within the last few stanza's.
    keep the good work up, i love it!
    love Tara-Kay

  • 16 years ago

    by Barry

    Sky blue... I think of you.....
    sky grey... you are my day....
    leaves...... but can't go
    bitter breeze....this wind I do not know

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Again an impeccable word choice and flow. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this is so wonderful!
    Beautifully penned love poem, with superb imagery and great wording.
    Every stanza is breath- taking, the whole piece is extraordinary and very unique.
    Well done, keep up
    5/5