You never notice me

by TrueLovesVictim   May 20, 2007


You never notice me
or things i love to do.

you never appreciate
the things i do for you.

You never seem to give a damn
for anything i work hard for.

You never seem to like it,
You only ask for more.

The days i spend crying
Win over the days i spend happy.

The days i spend happy,
Seem to always grow sappy.

My love for you is Decreasing
And the hate is increasing

My thought and feelings are disapating
and my heart is disappearing

My life is slowly ending
and my tears are slowly fading.

My bones start to dissipate
Ad you start to date

Was i ever even worth
Anything to you at all

Or was i only there
For you to be entertained?

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  • 16 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    Good job.beautifully written.a great poem about a broken heart.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    I like this one,,the flow was good, it is nicely penned , beautiful poem of love and broken heart!.....5/5..Melody...=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Oh very...Good..just love the way u express..if u have time ..stop by my poems..and comment plz..

    -sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    The beginning was great, it just sort of died a little after

    Seem to always grow sappy.

    that line. It seemed forced and cheesy. From there on it seemed like you were trying to hard to rhyme and get your message across. Sometimes just let things flow and fix them later. The word dissapate is a good word, but you over-used it. Hope I don't sound harsh, I just like to give people constructive criticism, because that's what I would want them to give me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    This was great nice job

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