Comments : Hunger Go Away

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very nicely written. Well thought out!

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Omg Robert that was effin powerful, I really loved the words you used i could see clear images of half starved people riddled with disease, so sad, so vivid. amazing Robet simply amazing. 5/5 it deserves no less.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittini

    Imagery really good, makes me speakless really good in every way can't give you anything but 5/5 realy amazing keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    Very effective and touching..5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    If only everyone would help to stop world hunger, but im not sure that will ever happen. although, i hope that it does end. i loved this poem, it was quite intriguing and the imagery was amazing. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mo

    I love reading about subjects that matter to the world - so self-less and meaningful.

    Good write. Thanks for letting me read it.

    Mo

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    "if we all help each other then maybe hunger will simply go away."

    Wow what a beautiful message. Your poem is from A to Z great. I loved your wordings and I like your poetry. 5/5 all the way.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautifully Nothing

    Amazing subject! you are such a good writer. wow, reading that kind of gave me chills (good chills) amazing job!!!

  • Very nice poem, its amazing and touching.

    Great poem.

    5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, the lines were very creative. And you put very strong emotions into it. Although I think it would have been better with punctuation to kinda neaten it up a bit. But it was great, good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    This poem is very emotional and deals with an issue that is happening in the world 2 day, it was great the way u structured it and it flowed nicely great work

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Great poem!!! Love it! Very powerful and touching! You're so right about how we should help others who are going hungry in places! Good point! Give this one a 5/5!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really enjoyed this, I found it to hold such power and intensity.

    A beautiful message behind the written words and portrayed with such beauty and elegance.

    The depth and emotion in this piece are easy for the reader to see, and I thought this was beautifully written.

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    I COMPLETELY AGREE I BELIEVE THERE SO MUCH MORE PEOPLE CAN DO TO HELP THOSE IN NEED, I'M SO GLAD THAT YOU WROTE THIS POEM , TOO MANY PEOPLE WORRIED ABOUT SENSELESS THING WHEN THERES BIGGER PROBLEMS TO WORRY ABOUT, BEAUTIFUL POEM...5/5