This is another very good poem ciao, love the song and u did great, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Nice pace, nice sentiment, and a great sense of warmth coming from words expressing a heartfelt sadness. This is no easy thing to do, yet you've done it so well.

I almost never vote, but this is a deserved 5. :-)

I love your poem! Its so sad because I can relate this to my life! Good job! keep up the good work!
-Aileena

Ohh this was so sad and yet so beautifully written.
Flow was good throughout the poem and the emotion is clear to see behind the words.

This was so sad, yet so very powerful. I usually find that poems with this much repetition is somewhat annoying, but in this poem, it worked well.

Good job. =)

Great job.

Nice punctuation. Lmao. That's the first thing I noticed.

Secondly, I really just loved this whole poem. It's beautiful, and well thought out, and not like everything else I've read.

I'm not sure what else to say; usually my comments are long, but this is just very nicely done. Great job.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5