Comments : Missin You

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is so well written poem. Sad one but you've written it so well. I liked the flow of the poem a lot. Nice work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    a good write, I like the rhyming scheme, and it flows nicely, the subject is great too, my favorite lines are:
    She loves him more than anything, he has no clue,
    Believe it or not Baby, but shes missin you!
    kisses stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by Ken

    Great job i really like this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Amanda Frost

    Thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by mohamad aref numan

    Really wonderful

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Aww, that was sweet. I'm not really a love poem type of person, but I liked this one. Th flow was off a little, but I like the way you discribed the person she was missing. I could see a picture of him in my head. So good imagrey! Keep writing!

    Cayce