Debbie
This makes me want to see the lakeshore once more. Listeniing to the aound of the waves ans the cry of the gulls. You have brought back many memories of happier times. Excellent job!
Love you

Excellent poem, very well written. Keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Another good write from a great writer.

Short but awsome. U r really frm a great poetic family. GREAT 5/5. My regs to the very kind Cindy.
with love
Fsams

Hikui's are a challenge, you did a hikui very well though!!! I like that you used the water!
good job.
peace

Serene white caps prance
^^^
I absolutely love this line ... I love the entire poem but this line is just so very captivating ... Breathtaking !
Take care Debbie
Luanne

Short, so sweet.
Full of imagery in word...
"Serene white caps prance
Lake Erie's slow summer dance"

The pebble drops and the ripple is felt.....
everywhere.....

Swell and soothing, it really shows promise! 5/5

What a beautiful form! Just in time for summer too.

You've indeed mastered this difficult form. It's as if you've written this piece with ease. How I wish I could write like you someday!

Best wishes! Love, Debbie

This is a great little poem, very unique. Wonderfully vivid images. It conveys such a peaceful contented milieu. A beautiful piece.

Peace, poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka