This peice was very short, but still oh so sweet. It is really catchy and portrays alot of emotion..
I didn't really get the title but perhaps this will just be the start of a master piece, and later on you will be incorporating the title.

Still well done,
Elainex

That was good i liked hwo you rymed there

This was so short but so lovly, it brought tears to my eyes, love is like the water, itll never slow down, and dry out. Well done on this one! I love it all so much, its very dear to my heart<3

With Care,
*~x~*CourtneyxHolland*~x~*

I love this. :]

I love this. Have you tried writing Haiku's? I think you would be realy good at them. 5/5

I love this!!

Short And Simple
i Like It .

Short and simple, but nice! And I love that you personify "love" and "water" by capitalizing them. I do similar things in a lot of my poetry. By capitalizing "lives" and not "dies" I'm thinking that power of the water living is much greater than that of the water dying. Which is cool. That's just what I got out of it. 5/5