This peice was very short, but still oh so sweet. It is really catchy and portrays alot of emotion..
I didn't really get the title but perhaps this will just be the start of a master piece, and later on you will be incorporating the title.
Short and simple, but nice! And I love that you personify "love" and "water" by capitalizing them. I do similar things in a lot of my poetry. By capitalizing "lives" and not "dies" I'm thinking that power of the water living is much greater than that of the water dying. Which is cool. That's just what I got out of it. 5/5