Nicely done. i dont know what to say about this poem. it was so romantic and i loved it. 5/5.

I love the ending on this, I certainly didn't see that coming, it was a twist.
Flow was flawless throughout, I enjoyed the imagery and the emotion and depth are clear for all to see.

Amazing again...
your poetry flows so well.
well done you are a great writer. loved how you made it seem so real rite untill the end... when it was all a dream, shows how we dream the things we truly want or miss... and then dont want to wake up...

well done

Love
Jacs
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This was awesome! I could feel the love within this one, it is so beautiful.
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Aawww =] And this is a nice job again =] The ending is different then I expected though!
You just deserve 5/5's =] ^_^

5/5 great job i loved it keep up the good work

Good flow, good rhyme. 5/5

Wow i just love all your poems....you're truly an amazing writter!!! which means...drum role plz...lol........im puttign you on my favorite authors list lol....!!!

<3 i love you silly