Comments : Pieces Apart

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    What else can I say, but it sounds like a prayer. looks like a masterpiece
    great work

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This poem like your others has great flow and word choice but is rather unique in many ways which is good. "I want to heal a injured heart Put it together from pieces apart" those lines were fantastic and i think we all wish we could. amazing job 5/5