Comments : You

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This one is not n exception. Well written n ur reasoning part was awsome. great work 5/5

    With love
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Beautifully penned! well done! Flow was flawless good job! keep writing! You're really talented! You should be proud!

    You are my life, you are my world
    ^ I find that very sweet! keep it up!

    5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    This poem kinda reminds me of my ex boyfriend. We've just starting talking again, and being friends.. but its so hard just to look at him...

    Very good poem, I could really relate to it! Keep up the awesome work!