Awesome poem...thanks for checking mine out...5/5

Now that was powerful, the message was clear and strong. And I agree. The word choice was perfect, the flow excelllent, and the emtion powerful. excellent write. 5/5

I think it's so important that we move along with life and not live in the past. It's nice to think back sometimes and visit those memories, but it's also nice to make new ones. Great job as always 5/5

Hahaha i like the way you write poems simply astounds me nice work -
raindrops 5/5

This is nice, one of the nicely written pieces i have read.. This poem is really true, i believe people should always spend time predicating the next instead of correcting the past.. I like the moral lesson behind it.. This life is too short, enjoy it while it lasts.

This is nice, one of the nicely written pieces i have read.. This poem is really true, i believe people should always spend time predicating the next instead of correcting the past.. I like the moral lesson behind it.. This life is too short, enjoy it while it lasts.

This is nice, one of the nicely written pieces i have read.. This poem is really true, i believe people should always spend time predicating the next instead of correcting the past.. I like the moral lesson behind it.. This life is too short, enjoy it while it lasts.

This is nice, one of the nicely written pieces i have read.. This poem is really true, i believe people should always spend time predicating the next instead of correcting the past.. I like the moral lesson behind it.. This life is too short, enjoy it while it lasts.

This is nice, one of the nicely written pieces i have read.. This poem is really true, i believe people should always spend time predicating the next instead of correcting the past.. I like the moral lesson behind it.. This life is too short, enjoy it while it lasts.