Excellent poem, very well written. Keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Wow!!Beautiful poem...lovely lovely work....filled wth passion n love....excellent work....great...5/5!..i soo loved it..very romantic wrk!

xxPoojaxx

This poem is really good because I was able to read it and picture it in my head and I appreciate that because that helps me understand.. and I love how you described the dark room and all that..it really good so keep up the good work...!

Exellent and just sweet enough it doesnt need to be under explicit, but it was still very good, i liked the way you translated love, its nice to see how other people preceive it

I liked the imagery you portrayed throughout this poem it was quite vivid. Your word choice discriptive which was great and the flow was pretty good. overall this was a nicely written poem. Well done ~mel

This was good... really good. great job.

I see a connection here with "Love Is/ My Love"

Your final stanza in that poem:

'My love for you
is like raging storm.
Violent and strong
yet gentle and beautiful.'

Definitely the best of your three new pieces, I think. :)

Some of your vocabulary was good but there were some parts it seemed like you were trying to hard for us to feel this passion and persnally i didn't feel it I think you need a stronger emotion then what you've got

Hey,
This one is absolutely my favorite poem of yours, i like your choice of words and the flow was good, it was like I could see it right in front of my eyes like a story, I loved it!
keep up the good work hun! 5/5
kisses stephanie

Hmmm...sorry...just didn't really feel anything in it...I dont know, it just semed like it wasn't saying much of anything...and some of the words coices were...interesting...did you mean to use "groaned"?