Hey, I'm Erin, nicely written! Girls suck sometimes...If she doesn't notice you, she isn't worth it. Keep up the good writing!

The best one on here you've written =)
The rhythm stayed steady throughout the whole piece, without any trippy bits.
And the emotion was clear to see, something a lot of people find hard to do
Excellent =)
5/5
*Gem*

Thank you, i actually dont know anything about poetry ^^

Nothing In comparison to yours Gem Gem ^^