Excellent poem, well written with a great flow,true about the paper and pen. I pour my heart in to it, great hob keep up the good work, your friend Tracy~5/5~

Deliver it because maybe someone will read.

this line was so awesome and finsihed the poem so well. it spoke to me so well. well done and keep writing.

5/5 david

Wonderful poem, I liked it from beginning to an end. 5/5

Like a sad movie within the lines,
Shows all the sorrow and secrets that whines.
You can see teardrops between the stanzas,
Or the happiness that will fill you in.

Wow^^...i loved these lines...
the metaphors were perfect n u portrayd this one so beautifully...loved it...n the ending line was superb!!

Kp writing!...Fab read!
5/5=)
xxPoojaxx

Very nice, it was very great, i loved it and in a way it was very beautiful and nice meaning, 5/5

10/5!!!!!!!!!!!!! pretty bomb man!! keep it up

Great

Oh i really REALLY liked this!!! The rhythem was quite good and the theme and tone was clear. I liked it.
My only suggestion is you could use "boy" instead of "guy" only because it sounds more vulnerable and "guy" i dont know it sounds a bit...ladish!? lol just a suggestion
i really loved this, though, gave it a 5
Geo

I suppose the line "This is what is a paper to a pen." would be better if its "This is what a paper is to a pen." (Hm, it's just a suggestion.)

"Shows all the sorrow and secrets that whines."

I absolutely adored the way you personified the sorrow and secrets to a being complaining to be revealed in the light.

'twas, yet again, a pleasurable read. I have no constructive critique so far. Nice work, overall. =] all the best and take care.

I like this poem. It's very unique, which makes it a refreshing read. The flow was good and the rhyming didn't sound forced at all. The metaphor's etc that you used worked very effectively in this. I love the first stanza and how you compared a guy falling in love to putting a pen to paper. An excellent piece. =] 5/5

Tammie

I liked it. I loved the topic. It was different. The flow was good and the format you used worked well. I gave this poem a 5/5.

Oh, its a wonderful poem! Simply amazing. It was perfect!

Like a meaningful letter you write,
To affect the recipient or just to excite
^I really love those two lines!

5/5 as always keep writing! and TC :)

Laura this poem has a sort of uniqueness in it. I really love the way you have worded n written it. Max ratings.

With love
Fsams

This is beautiful, very moving.
I found this to be original and unique in concept, a refreshing read.
The imagyer portrayed was beautifully done, and the flow was flawless throughout.

I loved this poem I have read a lot of poems but never a poem about poems this really was fantastic I usally give ideas on how to make poems better but when it comes to yours I have difficulty with a mejority of them as they seam to be very good.

Great poem. From start to finish I was drawn into this poem. The flow was great and I loved the aabc rhyming scheme. The first stanza and the last line of the last stanza are my favourite parts of this poem. 5/5

-Shannon <3

Aww this is so sad, but wirtten so well. I love it. Keep writing the amazing poems. 5/5