Comments : Trampled Buds And Missing Gems

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wonderful imagery, so deep poem... Poems like this one are rare, poems so unique and amazing.
    Keep writing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wo....i call that wonderful!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    What an amazing poem... It was so beautiful..

    "I burn incense and colorful candles
    Anointed with essence.
    And reciting magical words,
    To make my voice more lighter
    Till it reaches high up,
    So, as to re-fill my emptied red ocean."

    Your words were almost haunting.. so beautiful..
    Bravo m'dear
    5/5
    *Gem*