Comments : I'm Sick of These People

  • 16 years ago

    by repair her heart

    Wow this peom was so simple yet it was like when you read it theres a certain tone the poem gives. like you can actually feel the tension in your words. good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Hahaha I feel you with this poem lol If you keep your head up and go out and get happiness, you won't have to kill yourself lol 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    The rhyming here was excellent, as was the flow. I kind of understand what you're getting at with this poem, well I DO understand, however, I don't think it's fair to say you're SICK of these people. Each to their own opinion, though. All I would say though is, anybody has the right to act how they want, and live their life the way they want to. Yeah, they may not appreciate what they've got, their life may not be getting lived to the fullest, but that's THEIR problem. And they're the ones that will suffer for it in the long run.

    Anyhow, I'm blabbing now. Lol. Overall, it was an interesting read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was simple as was the word choice but i think it worked effectively. I thought the meaning was ok but as the same time i think alot of people will not like it expecially those who you say your sick of. The flow ws good throughout this. A good effort~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Riz

    "LIVE LIFE TO THE FULLEST
    and you won't regret a day."

    This statement I abosulutely agree. No one should be thinking they had their life the worst. I've seen wrost things, know people with worser things, and they kept smiling wihtout any help. Peace. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    I couldn't agree more - i no unhappiness can be powerful, but still. we all have probs, but some of us don't let them rule our lives!!! you couldn't have written this better!!!!