Comments : Lately...

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I loved the 5th stanza in this poem it was written so well and it's so true. "Sadness is my only friend, Guaranteed to be with me 'til the end. Seems when we're sad it only gets worse and never better. Great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Sadness is my only friend
    Guaranteed to be with me 'til the end

    Two strong lines with deep emotion portrayed nicely. I liked the 5th stanza the best it seemed like it held the most emotion. Your ryhme scheme was interesting. An enjoyable read. Well done~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    I like the poem!! i really like the part:
    "Happiness? What is that?
    Sounds like something on a welcome mat".
    peace

  • 8 years ago

    by Dominique

    This is how I feel almost everyday