This is a really great piece...a couple of typo's but hey...it can be fixed! Very well written, put together nicely!
Love it!
~Kayla

Loved it! So cute. Keep up the great work. Written well. 5/5
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I'm really loving what I'm reading of yours. Everything is just so enjoyable and keeps me interested from beginning to end. I could relate wholeheartedly to this entire piece. That probably helped me like it as much as I did. Good job. :)

Wow. this was gorgeous. i think out of all your poems that i've read, this is my favorite. keep it up!

5/5