I really like the poem. That's soo sad, yet its really got me thinking now..
5 out of 5 thanks for the comment.

This is an interesting piece. Just 1 correction if u dnt mind. I think u mean to say his not her. Am i rite? Neway I like ur imagiary. KEEP WRITING 5/5

Cool poem, good job writing it.

Good poem, interesting thought but i like it :)

Very nice poem indeed short!!!
u r also in my fav. authors list:)

God bless u

Nice poem .. deep feeling.. keep it up :D

Thx for commenting on my poem I really feel this one its so deep and meaningful keep righting ur an inspiration.

Awh this is really cute!!
Hope whoever this girl is falls for you!
I personally think any guy who can write is deffiantly a keeper

Great use of words and logic...I love it

Wow! Very deep and intense emotions in this poem.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

WOW! I really like this, you really have a gift dont stop writing you can tell tell the raw emotion in your poems and thats what makes it special great work!

Thats really cute. 5/5 comment on mine.

Whoa!!...i liked your poem!!..its so simple yet deep and meaningful!!..
i luv it!
hope to read more from you soon
luv bree xx

Oh wow. I don't know what to say! This was amazing!

Wow.. this poem has really been thought about.. it's beautiful! Keep it up.
xxx

Nice poem its makes you think and its been well thought thru keep up the good work 5/5

Wow. you've got talent. 5/5

This 1 is wiked keep this up