Very nice and beautiful , good work 5/5
I'll appreciate your comment and rating my poems

I added u to my favorite poets .. ^_^
Your sincerely
Hani

A lovly poem beautiful it's very thoughtfull this poem has a lot of emotion.

Aw.. This is really sad. Well I like the ending of the poem, well done.

Just edit this word
canâ??t

Nonetheless it was a good poem.

The ending was neat, not what I expected. This is a rather beautiful little love poem. Great read. 5/5

marcella