Comments : Spreading Love Across The Land (Terzanelle)

  • 16 years ago

    by Katy

    Wow very impresed!

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    I love reading about angels :) now that bottom bit went whooos right over my head lol but i reqally enjoyed reading this poem :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    "Reaching deep into each soul. They help us to find our melody"

    You know far too well how exceedingly fond I am with Terzanelles and Villanelles; this one is no exception either. These heavenly beings are very much significant in my existence, believing that they're invariably present and helping me at all times. =) When you stated the aforementioned lines, I could just relate because they simply are my inspiration...a joy to read! Well done upon writing such a challenging style! Love, Debbie (^__^)

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    I loved this poem so much. The rythm, style of writing all is masterly done, wonderful job dear, keep it up :)

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Cool format. I should try this one one day.

    where true lies<<truth lies?

    5/5. btw the other one I rated 5 too.

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I love it, but in the third stanza, you forget the "love" after true. I always loved terzanelle`s and this one is beautiful, great job.

    5.5
    :]