Firsst stanza?
Forced and unimaginative.

This has a good topic.
Although the way you wrote seems familiar.
It feels almost identical to the other poem I did.
I dunno... try to make your poems different.
I'm getting tired of using this word, but I'll say it to get someone with potential some advice.
This seems a bit cliched, doll.
I know, I know. I suck.
I am trully, trully sorry.
It's just that...
I'm getting tired of reading the same things.
I want something new.

My head has learned the truth in this
That ignorance is truly bliss
For in my mind then I could see
And think of you, and more, with me

^^beautiful ending....sums up all the emotions of this peice
yeah i think the person above was a li'l rude...i mean it had it's own charm...n te message n the topic u've ritten about is different..
Good work!..5/5
xxPoojaxx

Honestly it was okay for me. but its a little similar to your other poem. but anyway it was good. Flow was good I also like the rhyming of the poem! well done! keep up the good work!

This also spoke very deeply of wanting of someone's affection yet being unable to attain it. This is my personal favorite line:

That ignorance is truly bliss

That is so true on so many levels. This poem is so jam packed full of emotions that it pours through, you did a very very good job with this. It speaks so longingly of her, yet the pain of rejection. Flow and everything like that is wonderful, including the rhyming. 5/5 for sure!!

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Awwwwwwww such a sad writing. take care 5/5 and you have talent. i loved your poetry. that was my good experience.

Again, the rhyming in this is really, really good. I like the endings to your poems, they're very sweet. Nice job.

I liked the ending its the best part even tho the whole thing was good i just realy liked the last part and its good keep it up ~melissaraye~

Wow.
I loved this poem.
It was amazing.
Great flow, word choice, emotion, and all.
Keep it uppp.