Wow oh so true 5/5 it was powerful and great transitions and questions, maybe u can read one of mine.

A great poem! well done! uhm just a suggestion. but anyway and again it flowed well! good job! you're really talented you should be proud. keep up the good work!

And then one day when end is come
(And then one day when end is near)

The only part of this that doesn't really flow is the second line, instead of:

cannot even score

Try leaving the even out. It seems to sound better that way, to me anyway. Other than that, it flowed very well. It has a very powerful message behind it, Nothing is ever good enough. You try and you try but all anyone wants of you is more and sometimes that gets a little overwhelming. It's something I think anyone can relate to. It's awesome!! 5/5

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Uses of words are very good. though it was good work taek care 5/5

I can relate to this poem a lot. You have a knack for rhyming. I love it!

Good job. Keep it up.

I like your rhyming its good this was good to keep it up ~melissaraye~

Yet [[,]] still the acts appear to pale
For [[,]] whenever something you shall do

Wow.
That was an amazing poem.
Great emotion; word choice.
Flow was a bit off here and there, but no big deal, eh.
Amazing job!

Wow and daammm dat is so true and easily related to
great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5

I really liked this one. It was very deep. The only line that seemed out of place was the second to the last one. But still a great poem 5/5