I love how you're wrting is changing!!
This is an excellent poem. I like these poems.
Total masterpiece!!! Complete genius!!
Take care.

5/5
Kelly

Excellent job!..very beautiful..no words..it's just perfect write!...Amazing,Superb=)
Lovely peice!..great job on this one!
An easy 5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Wow! Very nice! I liked this one very much. Another excellent poem!!

Cool!!! i felt like i was part of the action. the poem had a trigger. pleaz keep writing:)

Looks great and has some passion in it!

Hey man long time since my last visit... dunno if u still remember me.. but since ur one of my favorites i had to check ur latest poems. this one i must admit is just a 3/5 to me when it comes to the writing. shit i hate doing bad critics... however i liked the topic n story very original and yeah i agree with Aussie above: i was too in the action so in some ways it was a good poem it's just that in my opinion it's not one of ur best ones

Wow! great poem as usual =]
my God your so talented, liked the flow and subject of this =] weldone.
5/5 as always.

~*~*Jen~*~

Wow this poem is like really great the flow and everything in it went together so well i give it a 5/5 you make my poems look bad lol

Hey thanks for all the great comments. I haven't had time to comment back.

This one...wow, probably one of the best of yours i've read. i like it...A LOT. 5/5.
:]] keep commenting/rating.
Always great to know how im doing.

That's true...we are human too
nice work