Really nice poem with a strong flow n wordings. U simply deserve 5/5.
with love
Fsams

Aw this is sad :( I like the way you rhymed some lines good job! flow was good for me! keep writing! and thanks for the comment. 5/5!

Really well written, excellent word choice and the flow was good,deep emtion strong and clear. altogather a good write 5/5

Aww..really great job!! The only thing is that
" leaves falling INTO the ground" Should have been "leaves falling ONTO the ground"
5/5
Tyanna