Basically what im trying to do is take the stanza's in the poem and turn them into their own poems...like candle so black, then it will go to she loves me, and so on and so forth.... just look at the other poem called candle so black and u will understand... hope u enjoy

This is cool, your poems seem to have a bluntness around them that bring out the images your poems talk about so that you can picture them, 5/5, keep it up, and check mine out sometime