Great poem. It pritty much tells of how I feel about my boyfriend. I love the descriptions you used. Another 5/5. :)

This poem is excellent, although it was short it was written well. I loved the 3rd stanza especially, "those hands so soft,delicate, but still strong" I would suggest capatalizing your I's to strengthen your poem. Excellent job all in all - 5/5

This was a really cute love poem.. i felt the emotion in it.. great desriptive words also.. and it flowed good.. 5/5

Work on capitalization & punctuation.
Other than that loved it!
Good flow, good emotion!
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4/5 keep it up.

The words were so powerful and sweet

But if you use punctuation..it would be better

And last if you capitalize 'i's you would make appearance flawless too

Other than those beatifully written
Keep it up
Laura

Lovely work...Powerful emotions portrayed thru this one...great wrk!...sweet...n good word choice too...lol.....very cute poem...
Kp writing=)
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

This is really a unique poem. Ur style, wordings, flow n the beautiful meanings make it such a unique one. Few words with repotior of meanings. Wow!
plx do read my 'Thank you'

With love
Fsams

Wow this was so wonderful. I loved the metaphores, they were so sweet and sounded like they were comming straight from the heart. My favorite part thought was how none of the metaphores were over used in face they were all new. Nice work. And the ending was the perfect touch, sweet but not overkill. Nice job.

I don't like this one. I think that you could create better atmosphere. Wording is not good and imagery is poor. You're other poems are better than this one. That is just my opinion, I won't rate it.