Mhhm.

by kelsi   May 26, 2007


I was just a little kid to him.
he was all i dreamed about.
he was my brothers best friend.
i was just the little sister.
--enough said,,the end--

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    It was fine on the whole. I just thought there's too much telling rather than showing for such a short piece. In any case, considering the preceding comments, I'm quite certain that a good number of individuals can correlate with this work. Fair enough. X)

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Short n sweet...the well written n the thought well conveyed..lol...true=)
    Good job on this one too...
    Kp writing!
    5/5

    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    Short and sweet. I liked it.
    AND i can totally relate...
    i have liked my brothers friends before..
    it can suck :/

  • 16 years ago

    by just a little bit hurt

    I feel ya! my big bro has some fine friends LOL!

  • 16 years ago

    by cutytothebuty

    Same thing happned to me
    i really liked my older brotehr's beset friend
    good poem ;)

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