Wow...this is creepy...
i like it....
i <3 dark poems...lol =)
but this is one of the best i read...
5/5, 'cause i can't rate any higher...
keep going
*isabel*

Of a soul that's crucified.
Of life's and loves despised.

^^Wow!!..lovely poem...so dark n perfect...it's just...amazingly penned dark poem..
5/5!=)
xxPoojaxx

So nice . good job

I effing love this.
I only say that to a few people, so feel lucky.
It's... blunt.
I love bluntness.
I don't like it when people just go around
Saying what they want.
There's no mystery in it.
The very beginning of your poem
It made me wonder
What are you talking about?
Although my questions were unanswered
It made me think about this
To me, you're talking about a snake.
All in all, wonderful write, my dear.
5/5 :]

I really liked this poem but some of the words kind of thre me off. "When evil falls to play" I think it should be when evil comes to play.
"Of a destined thats denied." I think it should be of a destiny thats denied.
"The dominance that they vie" and this one I"m not to sure about but it didnt quite make sence to me. Other than those very few lines I really liked this poem. I liked the image of a snake, and the constant sence of wonder. Nice work.

Great poem, nice rhyming.
Very dark. I enjoyed reading it.
Well done.

Very well written. Its mysterious and deep yet it seems to touch a place in my soul, almost like i've known and seen that person with 'evil in they're eyes'. I like the way you didnt come write out and say who or what had the evil in they're eyes because it made it easy to relate to the poem. Awsome job! 5/5

I see it in your evil eyes.
Their serpent slits so deep.
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^^ I just pictured Voldemort after reading those two lines... o.O :))

Wonderful writing- rhyming was consistent, and flow was alright, well done ^.^
5/5

This is frikken awesome!
I adore this...
The opening really pulled me in, it was very intense and hardhitting and from there on it just gets better and better.
I particularly loved the ending, it was beautiful and stunning at the same time.

I loved the rhyming in this, it was really good, it flowed well. you are a good writer, keep it up
xxxx

It is good, very unique. I don't like wording to much but atmosphere is still great.
I feel the shudder in my bones...
From the secrets that they keep. -these is my favorite stanza. 5/5

A well written poem. Mysterious and dark, the way I like it. 5/5 ^_^

It great!
I love it, I can just imagine those evil slit eyes lol.

For some reason... It reminds me of Voldemort from Harry Potter lmfao!