Very powerful words and statements in this piece; it doesn't flow like I would like but it is still as powerful. Great emotional write.

With love,
~Richi~

Wow...I really love this one also ^_^ Very intense emotion that grips the reader and makes those emotions their own ^_^ I love when a poem does that to me =) 5/5 again ^_^
Rhea

I really loved this. it was so raw and bursting with powerful emotions. I felt so much paina nd anger when I read this. Very nice work. Shanik