Comments : My mind

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Tracy
    Losing the one you love through death or breakup. Is one of the deepest pains that can be felt. Hope all your wishes come true.
    Great piece.
    Take care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was so sad and so touching..and the poem was a really affective one
    I especially liked those;

    My mind is lost and my heart is getting really cold
    being without your love can make me feel very old.

    Gorgeous work tracy
    Take care,
    Your friend
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    This poem is very emotional. Great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I liked this poem a lot, i liked how it was in pairs because this reinforced the idea of couples and gave the poem a sense of being worthwhile.
    the imagery was amazing and so deep.
    my fav bit was about looking at love and knowing it's blind.

    great!
    espoir

  • 16 years ago

    by nina

    Beautiful Poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by dawn green

    Very beautiful poem tracy!
    god bless

  • 16 years ago

    by Skulblaka Sverda

    I cried reading this.............