You did an excellent job on this write, I can relate to it very well ,but yet I still love her just the same even tho I know it will never be ,at least I won't go out without a fight, great job keep it up ~5/5~ your friend Tracy

OMG this is so beautiful wow well written and the rhymes r perfect plus the awsome flow. I love the last lines wow 5/5

Great rhymes and lines each lien flows into the next really well great piece xox lithium.
ps i like your picture.

Er.. this reminded me of my ex.. She doesn't want to talk to me anymore.. Haha..

Anyway I like the emotions in the poem, I can really relate to this..

that doesn't make sense and isn't right.
So please leave and don't stay
^^My ex told me this before..

you deserve a 5/5!

I really enjoyed reading this poem! u write beautifully!