This is sooooo not up to your normal excellence... what happened? usually u have a beautiful flow and great rhyme skills... this one is just way off.... u still have the awesum vocab but i think--no, i know--you could do way better

Yet another gr8 write from yu:D
am i rigtin saying that all the poems that u write about are about some girl??...i dont know thats just the vibe im getting...if im wrong just give us a msg and say so lol

u kno u should enter ur poetry into this poetry contest they have...if ur interested private msg me and ill tell u more...theres prizes and everything..its really good...:D

well tk care
bree

And thats how we trick ourselves into being hurt over and over and over

just for the slimest chance that we could be submerged in the blind euphoric love we all keep searching for